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local-files/genericTrans/lyrics/all_004_Kamurogiku.json

@@ -2,20 +2,20 @@
   "焼き付けて\r\n": "Let this abundant exaltation",
   "この繚乱の高揚を\r\n": "Burn into your mind",
   "Wow...\r\n": "Wow...",
-  "太陽は知らない 月には届かない\r\n": "The sun knows none, the moon doesn't reach",
-  "絶望も希望も震える鼓動も\r\n": "Despair, hope, my trembling heartbeat",
-  "ざわめく人ごみのまとわりつく温度\r\n": "And the noisy crowd's clinging temperature",
-  "今だけは心地よくなるの\r\n": "Only now are they comforting",
+  "太陽は知らない 月には届かない\r\n": "Unknown to the sun, not reaching the moon",
+  "絶望も希望も震える鼓動も\r\n": "Despair, hope, and my trembling heartbeat",
+  "ざわめく人ごみのまとわりつく温度\r\n": "The clinging heat of the noisy crowd",
+  "今だけは心地よくなるの\r\n": "Just for now, it all feels pleasant",
   "遠雷に似た合図が響く\r\n": "A signal resembling distant thunder echoes",
-  "逸る想いと呼び合うように\r\n": "As if to call out to each other with stray thoughts",
+  "逸る想いと呼び合うように\r\n": "As if resonating with my impatience",
   "感じさせてよ もっと 愛を\r\n": "Let me feel it, more of that love",
   "暗闇に咲く葛藤と見つめ合っていたい\r\n": "I want to stare at the discord blooming in the dark",
-  "沈黙を破って降りそそぐたび\r\n": "Whenever it breaks the silence it descends",
-  "心 儚さに揺れて\r\n": "My heart flickers fleetingly",
-  "鬱陶しいくらいの熱量に\r\n": "It's so depressingly hot",
+  "沈黙を破って降りそそぐたび\r\n": "Whenever it descends, breaking the silence",
+  "心 儚さに揺れて\r\n": "My heart trembles at its fleetingness",
+  "鬱陶しいくらいの熱量に\r\n": "In this almost-irritating heat",
   "あぁ もう少し浮かされていたいな\r\n": "Ah, I'd like to get carried away for a bit longer",
   "息を呑んで そらさないで\r\n": "So breathtaking, don't look away",
   "忘れたくない繚乱の高揚を\r\n": "I don't want to forget the abundant exaltation",
   "最高の最後まで\r\n": "To the very end",
   "目をそらさないで\r\n": "Don't look away"
-}
+}